Here’s to the doubts that you cynics enjoy
to express in your poisonous lore:
I have tasted the lies
in the glare of your eyes,
but I'm not afraid anymore.
These are the dreams that have carried my soul
and to this standing truth I'm secure:
You can drag every hope
from the fires of hell
to the waves of a treacherous shore,
and well-soaked or well-done
I will blaze like the sun
because I'm not afraid anymore.
These are the scars
that you've left to my name
and I'm set for an infinite more.
If your aim is to break me
your focus is vain
because I'm not afraid anymore
Mock as you may, I shall spend all my days
chasing cobwebs away from the door.
And when strength fades to none,
forward still I shall run
because I'm not afraid anymore.
Author notes
Published in the Oracle.
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A contest entry
- enter your best poem, prewrites allowed :) by sillysmile.
400 points, ended November 8, 145 entries
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omq !
i really like this poem .
i can really relate too this
yuu are a qreat writer !
do yuu play the guitar?
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i like it.
your an amazing writer.
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speachless
is is verry good can i add u as a fav
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Thank you for this work of lyrical, well metered, and rhymed poetry. It is a rarity to find such talent on this site anymore. I now realize the extent of my poetic prowsing, and "I'm not afraid anymore" either. I have begun to reach out. I spent this week sending my work to various publishers that don't mind unsolicited entries. It is time that someone actually saw me for what I am truly worth. You my friend, with this title and these superb words have confirmed my knowing. Thanks again for the reassurance and the brilliance!
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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It is soooooooo good to be back and reading one of my most treasured and favorite poets again. I thought I had lost you
I added this name to my favs so I can find you easily again 
as for the poem it is very beautiful, uplifting and encouraging. I love the strength in this piece. Well done my friend as always.
huggles
Lena
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You are quite the talented and creative writer. Your words are impeccable, they flow so nicely.
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wow- your an amazing poet
ive read a few of your poems and I think that they are ace! well done, 10/10 from me
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this has good meaning. i like it.
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Fear
One powerful emotion and a tool for the abuser. But to stand takes courage and to not be afraid anymore is truly a blessing.
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I love this. the "I'm not afraid anymore" just adds an entirely different meaning to the poem for me. Its really inspirational.. Nice job!
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i really like the way you write (:
keep up the great poems! -
Amazing
This is a really good poem, keep up the good work
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I love this also. This reminds me of something I wrote in the same manner:
"I've never failed my words, and I never will".
The part of this that I took with me most was:
These are the scars
that you've left to my name
and I'm set for an infinite more.
If your aim is to break me
your focus is vain
because I'm not afraid anymore
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Excellent Writing
Yes, fear nothing!
Life here is organized forms of matter in motion. Hell is an erupting volcano -- just stay away from them.
Also, be thankful there is no (military) draft.
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what a great poem! i really enjoyed reading it! it was well written! i loved it when you said "I have tasted the lies in the glare of your eyes" omg been there soo many times! fantastic write!
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You shout it out loud!!!! No one should be afraid of anyone or anything... Well if this was a perfect world, (without spiders)
I really enjoyed this, holds so much power in the words and message comes across loud and clear.
I ejoyed this and loved the flow.
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wow i love this i think its awsum. it all flows together so perfectly and is just so easy for anyone 2 read. it has a great message behind it one which so many people should hear.
i also want 2 thank u for your comment you left on my poem Never Knew. it is very much appreciated so thank you!!
much love ~Haunted~
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I really enjoyed reading this. The first stanza is my favourite - it is so strong, staring down your foe. I like the positiveness of the poem, the standing up to the fears.
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i was about to say, it sounds quite familiar. well, its a solid corey write, in that its a beautiful piece: a nice cadence that could rock any babe to sleep (im a nerd). its not your best ever but it is still far better than any of mine could get.
"and well-soaked or well-done
I will blaze like the sun "
i thought those two lines were especially brilliant, btw. remindes me of anne sexton a little, just in those two (and you ought to know the weight of a comment like that, from me, haha).
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Well Writen
I know this feeling and somedays I still feel like this. However the love the ray of hope that shines and becomes brighter through out the poem. Nice work! -
I love it
Turning around to face your fears and run blindly toward them. Btw i hope your still keeping your word
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This is an awesome.. hopeful.. inspirational..POWERFUL piece. It is well written with strength and a wonderful message. I am so glad I stopped in to read this. !!! ANd, congrats on getting it published ! Kudos to you poet. Blessings. Debby
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WELL DONE
Its a poem for all who feels the world is in rejection. For its not the world but a few that trys to bring down the different for they are afraid of the things they can never do. Stay strong and life will follow -
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Congrats on your acceptance!
Is it possible to be truly wholey unafraid? Tell me your secret!
I am a cynic to the bone, but I do not enjoy my doubts.
This was very well written. I loved it!
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Well done
I ike your free style of negotiation and analysis..
your subjective then objective turn of events..
They blend in a very smooth reading, and are truly easy to imprint and see through.
The wisdom is there, the point is nicely covered..
a man fighting for his right to live the way he sees right, and to guard against his inner doubtings that at times others (cynics as you refer to them) may reinforce or aggrevate.
Be well, a worthy write, and a good read.
RD.
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Congratulations ...
A beautiful poem that reads so smoothly and I like the end line that repeats. Very nice and I'm glad to see that you posted this winner! joy
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Fantastic pleadge of victory over threats feeding on fears.Impecable meter and rhyme.Very slick piece!Loved it.~Suseann
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