Oh, sweet crystalline diamonds from the sky
Bringing the musty smell of ozone from the heavens high
Cleansing the corrupt day and the blasphemus night as it slowly streams by
Washing away the worlds fowl deeds
Wiping clean the pollution of years past
In the Odiferous Barrage of gossamer beads
Pristine tears plunge on down from the celestial sphere
Purging Bespattered sins of years
Forming beautiful pulchritudinous curtains sheer
Washing away the crimes of decades past
In the oh so silent deluge
Such power, by none, has ever been surpassed
Serene drops cling to coniferous trees
Refracting light like the most flawless prism
Sometimes dropping amidst the gentile summer breeze
Waning as the day draws to a close
Hitching a ride on the Wild West Wind
Quietly gliding as she silently blows
Oh, sweet crystalline diamonds from the sky
Leaving the musty smell of ozone from the heavens high
And the serene day and silent night as it slowly passes by
A contest entry
- Options for all you poetic people!!! by moment liver.
675 points, ended June 6, 2007, 66 entries
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Comments
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great poem
it flowed perfectly
and i loved the rhyming in it
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Well, the read was out of this world! I like it - the word choice is interesting and I loved the images you created. This is a wonderful poem with wonderful flow.



