Upon the whispering wind
Lies your destiny my young protégé
I chose a path a long time ago
Which led me to eternity’s end
So, upon your journey young alchemist
Neophyte as you are
Listen to those who have walked before
Greetings from a Zelator
The path of darkness is a much deeper walk
You have to listen when the Angels talk
When darkness is all around
The more light you will have found
Upon the desert sand I say secrets untold
Take ye this lead and turn it to gold
I know you can’t do it a journey will begin
Darkness is deep and deep within
What you cannot see, is where the truth lies
It’s no good looking to starry skies
They’ll tell you goodness is a virtue and
They’ll lead you through with a gentle hand
But fuck them they don’t know anything
I seen it all and it’s the truth I bring
I guide thee to a door which you alone must open
Ye will sign an oath that cannot be broken
Secrets abound will come like you’ve never seen
You’ll travel to places you’ve never been
Darkness holds more secrets than light ever will
Close your eyes and feel it and be still
Soon you’ll understand what it is all for
Greetings Neophyte from a Zelator…
In a list
A contest entry
- Magical argument by Neophyte.
550 points, ended April 14, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful
This was amazing. Such fantastic images. Very well done and congrats on the silver.
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ohhh I liked this one. I got out of it that a person is taking a spiritual path through life and does not know where to go or how to move on in certain aspects of life. I liked this poem. I could tell you truly spent some time working on this one. Great job.
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Haha nice write up, liked how you referred my username as the person walking down this path.
Enjoyed it very much, I liked its story and how you connected it to the theme as well as presenting it.
Thank you for entering
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