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Swiveled its Liquid Shooter

Seat at the bar swiveled its suitor

Courting its aroma liquid shooter

 

Another round passed it in smoke

As the bar consumed white powder cloak

 

Men in their fat cigars puffing its roll

While fist fly off liquid addiction decontrol

 

Another has fallen from grace

In rose colored bottles embraced

 

Another round passes my addiction

As my hands shake off this conviction

 

But another day swallowed its bottle juice

Sloshing my liquid bitters seduced

 

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  • PoetBoy2008
    April 19, 2007
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    not bad at all i really like it. keep up the good work

    • haley27 gold member
      April 19, 2007
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      Thank you

      My son Jermey help in this poem. I need post them on their own merits. This his tribute as he was an addict for awhile. Been clean of drugs and achol four years. woo! hoo!Hale27


  • Poetic Aphrodite
    April 12, 2007
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    Thankyou for your wonderful entry, Bella