Slashes, slashes so many slashes.
Bleeding and oozing all of my soul.
Calming, calming oh so calming.
Slashes, slashes a few more slashes.
Flashes of pain, flashes of light.
Tears, tears how many can I shed?
It's bleeding me dry, I’m bleeding myself.
Heaven, hell, heaven, hell.
Where will I go when it all ends?
Hell or heaven? Heaven or hell?
Suicide, suicide, what will I do?
What will I choose?
Razors, pills, or even rope.
How else can I cope?
I don’t have any hope.
The angel of death is coming for me.
How long can I hide?
Should I even try?
Angel oh angel, what took you so long?
I’ve waited for you a forever too long
That is my story and now it is through.
So I’ll say so long…even to you.
A contest entry
- dark and sad rhyming poems please by nobodys-girl.
425 points, ended April 25, 2007, 66 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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powerful
i luvd this..ive been there as so many people have.,..im sorry u had to too..it was a great poem
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I can really relate to this poem......I battle with self-injury and know the struggle....and the pain...and the need, it's hard to let go. You wrote this wonderfully...I loved the opening loines very intrapping......
keep writting
XTashaX -
this kinda reminds me of myself...in a twisted kind of way...i like it though...thankyou so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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