I love you,
You know that it's true,
I'm sorry, i never meant to hurt you,
It is complicated,
But don't think i don't mean what i say,
It's all very true,
When ever i see, read, or say love it makes me smile,
It's true,
I am feeling very blue,
And do not know what to do,
Why did you have to make things complicated,
My mind is messed up and i can not think,
I blame you,
But do not forget,
I will always love you,
And you know that it's true !
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A great and honest poem, and a new style for you. Love is very confusing but rewarding if treated properly and nourished. ~Ľũčąś~
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Nice poem, it sounds very honest.
You have an original style of writing, you don't grasp on to certain schemes and that's not easy to do.
You sure have some talent in you, but I would suggest that you experiment a bit more. Try other rhymes, expand your vocabulary ( read : Use google a lot )
Anyway, beautiful poem...
Keep writing !
Greetz
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