My love, I know that you are true,
I feel it in my heart.
You'll never give me cause to rue--
my love, I know that you are true.
Upon first glance my love just grew,
I knew we'd never part:
My love, I know that you are true,
I feel it in my heart.
Our life is like the deepest ocean,
filled with love divine.
Love's the sweetest magic potion;
our life is like the deepest ocean.
Love is all about emotion--
my heart in yours and yours in mine.
Our love is like the deepest ocean,
filled with love divine.
A contest entry
- A Macandrew Triolet contest by macandrew.
375 points, ended April 18, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
So pleased to see a trophy on this beautiful piece. Just a delight to read and filled with love and care. Congratulations. ~Pamela
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This was one of the smoothest reads in the contest and therefore placed very high.
Beautifully written.
John
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Very pretty and romantic. I love that you trust your heart in someone elses hand. That is almost as tough as writing an extended triolet!! Great job and good luck in the contest
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Well written triolets. Love the line:
Love's the sweetest magic potion;
One day perhaps a sip.
Talia -
Sweet
Beautifully penned triolet! Good job. Good luck, and write on, poet.
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great write with the sound of love flowig through the words with passion of devotion. Great write Bill.
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impressive
fantastic bill, i've never seen this form before, i really really like this. the flow is perfect and it's full of real passion, very well done pal and best of luck in the contest, i'm rootin' for ya pal,
Alex
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Excellent Bill, a wonderful Triolet. Filled with all those lovely emotions...mal
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What a beautiful triolet! I loved this, it flowed so well and was full of warmth and love! All the best in this contest!
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