and she hides.
from the world.
beneath shimmery make-up&
false statements,
stating the untrue
"i'm okay"
"i don't need help"
"i'm not hungry"
"leave me alone, i'm fine"
but really all she wants to do
is be enveloped by a big, warm hug.
she's shrinking
quickly
away from you,
away from me,
frail bones
&
fragile emotions scream
"help me, i'm falling"
i swear i'll be there to catch her
.
.
.
but can i catch myself-
from stumbling over these words,
these hopeful words leaking from my mouth?
i don't know,
but i will try.
Author notes
hunny....
i hope this helps.
i'm going through the same.
best luck to you.
i'm here.
feel free to message me.
~Love in a tombstone~
option 4.
A contest entry
- isn't insanity b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l.l by bleeding-within.
300 points, ended April 19, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 0 by Lauren Noir.
850 points, ended June 2, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
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This was beautiful. I love the way that you put the emotion of determination and almost hopelessness in it at the same time. that's not an easy thing to do.
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This is wonderful, it was really personal and beautiful, but it was also for others
it was really caring
I love the title, we're all angels and some just fall
And it's up to brilliant people like you to catch us
And one day I hope someone catches you
You are beautiful
All my love, thank you so mcuh for this entry
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very gd i enjoyed thie write thanx for entering! =] x
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but can i catch myself-
from stumbling over these words,
these hopeful words leaking from my mouth?
Im so head over
heels for your endings hun!<3
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wow bby, this poem scares me, because I am going through this right now, but totally not on purpose (tho no one believes me) I'm never hungry, I don't eat often at all, and when I do it's very very little before I'm full, and I'm rapidly losing weight, and everyone thinks I'm doing this on purpose, I didn't think anything was wrong til I read this poem, now I'm worried about myself....I'm scared.
As for the poem, it was amazing...full of support and hope for hope (if that makes sense...lol) But I absolutely loved the write bbydoll, as always, your fabulous.
ily
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