You see I'm not okay,
With the shitty way,
You've been treating me.
It's not even you anymore.
And all that time I was wasting,
Your phone call I was waiting for,
But you were with that other girl.
Time's up, it's over now.
You don't know what you're missing,
'Cause it's still me you should be kissing,
So I can pull that shit you pulled on me.
Revenge ain't so sweet when it's directed at you.
Call me bitter, call me a bitch,
Doesn't matter to me one little bit.
It's just hitting me now...
I'm better without you.
So you're happy, let's see a smile,
Was it really all that worthwhile?
For all you put me through,
I'd certainly hope it was.
Don't worry darling, I'll be just fine.
Yeah, somehow I think I'll survive.
Save your breath and save your lies,
One day you'll see how it feels...
Karma's a bitch.
Author notes
This poem was written after the sort of recent break-up with a guy I was in love with. You see, he went on spring break in London for school, got smashed and hooked up with another girl. Now they're kind of dating. But here's the best part; before he left, he told me not to go to any parties and get drunk...because he thought I'd cheat on him. Silly hypocrite!
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hmmm...i enjoyed the rime a bit..some of it was nicely put...of course there is the cliche at the end...but eh...this is a poem to describe feeling so cliche is fine..the only thing that happened when i read this was that some really good rhythm would be created and then it would change very suddenly...i think this would be hard to read out loud...idk...the feeling in it is very well expressed...
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