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Why can't we just 'be?'

Why can’t we be friends?
Why can’t we just escape time
And simply ‘be?’
Just you and me
Forever and ever
Always together
Until the end of time.

A contest entry

short and sweet; to the point.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 25, 2007

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    Why can't you and why can't me and the one I have feelings for be able to do that? In these short lines you can feel a lot of impact and understand what you really want deep inside.


  • BArBiE slaPPed m3
    April 13, 2007
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    Short sweet and tottally awesome!
    xoxo,
    Your Dumpster doll


  • InfiniteCaitlin
    April 12, 2007

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    awww, so cute baby doll. I love it, very heart felt and very intimite, amazing bbdoll

    Love love lvoe

    & hearts ;


  • xshotxinxthexheartx
    April 11, 2007
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    very sweet

    i like it...like my stuff-ish...you totally got into my mind


  • Weetzie bat
    April 11, 2007
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    short and simple. and awesome!!!!
    i can relate...I kinda feel like this right now


  • oh willoughby
    April 11, 2007
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    short and sweet greatness!


  • makeout kid
    April 11, 2007
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    this is short && sweet.
    && simply lovely.


  • SouthernSexGoddess
    April 11, 2007

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    Awww...

    Teryl...it never fails...you're awesome! We definitely will stay in touch if and when I move back to Lanier County!!!!

    Love Ya,
    Jessica


    • PlasticPrecious
      April 11, 2007
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      Heck yeaaaah!!!

      we are definately going to stay in touch!

      i cant beleive i might be going back! (LHS)

      im so excited!

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