a single tear rolls down her cheek
her black hair blocking her puffy eyes
her heart is torn
confusion has set in
her mind's a blur
which one should she pick?
a question she would rather leave unanswered
lonliness surronds her
and she feel its cold embrace
and shivers on her sunlit bench
silently crying, the tears rolling down her face
she pays no attention to the world around her
but sits transfixed upon her thoughts
a single tear rolls down her cheek
A contest entry
- i want to know your gothic side by militsu.
300 points, ended April 12, 2007, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Alone.....Prewrites allowed by LoveNeverDies.
370 points, ended May 17, 2007, 93 entries
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Comments
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yo i .ike your style how would like to jump in my contest
simply because you wrote what i want
any ways
i like this poem it shows a person witha broken heart and so this person sees no world but poain and take no heed in what is around her
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