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Empty Heads and Internet Dating.

Lift love from back seats,
And QWERTY keys,
find truth in words spelt wrong
and empty headed girls
who dye their hair to

suit your needs.

Sit with true lust in your eyes,
computer screen by Dell,
and a picture of a girl in her
brassiere makes you

believe you are

in love.

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  • Blankscreen2222
    September 9, 2007
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    This is quite hysterical.
    I loved it!


  • PoertyFreak17
    May 28, 2007

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    I like your writing!!!...I think a few stanzas of intensity would keep this poem seem 'alive'...but I love it!


  • ibsons hysops
    May 22, 2007
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    a truth so rare.... what tech can sadly bring....


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    May 22, 2007
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    Wow....truth speaks!!

    Internet has done this to people...a shame...

  • poetrycall
    April 15, 2007

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    He doesn't seem like he has a life-- he DOES seem like he's an ex.
    I liked this. I liked the last part and how well it flowed.


    • literaryromantic
      April 16, 2007
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      It is an ex. He doesn't have a life.
      And thank you for your comment, it made me smile.

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