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Her story.......






Her life has passed, it has run its course, but no more will troubles find her,
She now lay in peace, free from all ills, where earthly problems no longer bind her.
Her memory only lives on in me, with no kin to share her passing,
Ignored by those who should have cared, except for vultures  now amassing.

Ann, born in the year of 1939, to a troubled life in the city's heart,
A loving mother raised her from birth, till war sick father tore her life apart.
A scene no eight year old eyes should see, was played as she cowered on the stairs,
The flat iron swung in her fathers hand, and killed her mother quite unawares.

She was taken away to a strange new home, no explanation of her past was given,
no mention from whence she came or why, or the madness by which her father was driven.
Through foster homes she was then passed, one pair of hands on to another,
no explanation to her was offered of the demise of her father or mother.

Left alone to deal with the horrific scene, which replayed often through her mind,
No words of comfort were offered to ease a childs thoughts so maligned.
The story filled the papers of her father's guilt and how he'd been hung.
but Ann was left in doubt and confusion, filled with grief that was left unsung.

As teen age years knocked on her doorstep, her mistake was soon to show,
Now heavy with an unborn child, she was thrown out onto the road.
The shame could not be accepted, she was shunned and expelled from her home,
With a bag of meagre possessions, she sat on the kerbside crying and all alone.

Back in care the authorities dismissed her, so with her boyfriend she ran away,
An american soldier took her off with him, across the seas to the USA.
Their daughter was born on american soil, but life was not without its trials
But she made the most of what she had, to make her life there at least worthwhile.

But trouble once more came knocking, marriage finally ended in shatters,
After conflict with her own flesh and blood, returned to her roots, her life in tatters.
In the city, her uncle took her under his wing making sure that she was cared for,
giving her a home and food, a place to work, a caring world now to explore.

And so her life went from strength to strength, a success in her new career.
But still no word or letters or calls from her own daughter, ever did appear.
The years passed on through a stormy life, fortune came but never stayed,
but she carried on as old age approached and her health began to fade.

It was five years ago I met her, this older lady needing a helping hand,
Barely able to do things on her own, or live her life the way she planned.
But illness upon her took a strengthing grasp, as years passed our friendship grew.
Until her final fight with breath was lost and for me to relate her story to you.

I hope one day to fulfill a wish, Ann's story and life to bestow
To her daughter who lives across the sea, but where, no-one knows.


Sleep in peace Ann.. I will miss you.

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  • BornWithAPen
    April 13, 2008

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    no critique no nothing just two words that express what a delight this was to read and for allowing her story to be read....Thank you


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    January 30, 2008
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    I believe I read this before, not sure if I commented on it, but this is beautiful Ann. I know it really impacted you, her death and I know she is watching over you. You meant a great deal t her too. >:D<


  • Celticmoon
    January 30, 2008

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    Powerful words have expressed the admiration of a dear friend well. She was lucky to have you and you to have her. A wonderfully penned tribute you have in her honor.

    Keep it forever flowing!
    Blessings
    Bel


  • Ellis gold member
    December 14, 2007
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    Very Sad Story -- Very Beautifully Told

    This poem gripped me from the beginning. Very moving; very well written.


  • nordicsky silver member
    October 28, 2007

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    This is such a sad story; it’s hard to think of anything positive to say. I suppose the worst part is thinking about her childhood. The loneliness and isolation of loosing both parents under such circumstances must have been terrible. It’s easy to think that fate was very unkind to her. But I don’t believe that. Everything happens for a reason. Even though there were many tragic moments in her life, I’m sure there were many small moments of joy. Perhaps, just to be alive is the best we can ask for.

    Thanks for posting this thought provoking read.
    Peter


  • Kmezz
    June 29, 2007
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    That is very touching, really powerful words


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    April 13, 2007

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    not something I would wish on my worst enemy to go alone. Fortunately she had one good friend, often that can equate to a hundred acquaintances...


  • galfalfa gold member
    April 12, 2007

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    So sorry Ann, i know she meant a great deal to you - you wrote her such a dignified fitting tribute and told her story well,

    galfalfa


  • Star Shine
    April 12, 2007
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    this told the tale in such a captivating way, and touched my heart though I do not and did not know any of the characters. You made this real, and the rhyme and flow add to the telling. Thank you for sharing, my condolences, and I hope that there is resolution as time goes on.-K


  • blondone
    April 12, 2007
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    You've been Hood-Winked by the Poetic Bandits !!!

    Heart tugging read the sad story is written with great imagery for us to see the pains as she grew, life hands out some unfair stuff unknown reasons to us that lies in God's hand I hope her life with him holds no pains and worries and she suffered enough on earth, very heart touching


  • capricornpoet
    April 11, 2007

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    Tragedy

    Sad is life as it is sometimes filled with tragedy and love always out of grasp till a final touch of love, then an angel calls her home.


    • AnnD Moderators member
      April 11, 2007
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      I am pleased she is no longer suffering with her illnesses any more and at peace.
      She was such a pleasure to know for these last five years and has left me with many smiles and colourful memories.

      Thankyou for coming to read about my friend.

      kindest wishes

      Ann

  • Tudor Rose
    April 11, 2007

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    very well written and told

    Hi Ann, first I know that you miss this friend and again I am sorry, she was obviously a very strong willed woman to of gone through so much and to of carried on with her life rather than given up or resort to drink or drugs to cope with memories filled of pain and heartache, I am glad for both of you that you met each other, I think the only sad thing of this in relating to your friend, is that through her trials she would of obviosly liked to of seen her daughter again before she passed, I think you were very lucky to meet your friend, because now you can probably cope alot better with things knowing what your friend endured, and reflecting on that must help you through your hard times, I hope one day her daughter visits her mother, so she can be at peace, you wrote this very well, she would of loved it.

    • AnnD Moderators member
      April 11, 2007
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      Thankyou Ben for coming to read about her.
      Yes, she was a special and strong lady. A definate 'character' to be sure.
      I sincerely hope that her daughter can be found so that she too can make her peace with her mum at last.
      I am sure it would have meant alot to Ann to know that she did.

      Ann


  • Breaking The Girl
    April 11, 2007

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    very powerful. It flowed so well, and the rhyme was so amazing without seeming forced; you don't see that too much. The story itself was beautiful, in a sad way.


  • Lady-Pegasus
    April 11, 2007

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    WOW, I can barely respond to this piece, it has so hit home. While not the same story, so much of it still mirrors one i know far too well, but that is not for here and now. This is a bit rocky in places and I wonder at some of the spelling (kerbside, should be curbside, yes? If this is English from Eng or Aus, my apologies it is not a spelling I am familar with). But the feelings and the story ring so brightly in here the techicalities are almost moot! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *

    • AnnD Moderators member
      April 11, 2007
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      I felt somewhat compelled to write about Ann, I will always remember her myself, but felt the need to tell her story for others to see.
      She was a wonderful lady, maybe not having the most graceful vocabulary, particularly when she was shouting at other road users who got in our way or stole our parking spot. But she was generous to a fault and I and my children loved her as only a friend can.

      Thankyou for coming by to read, I appreciate it so much as I am sure Ann herself would.

      Ann


  • symitar Moderators member
    April 11, 2007

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    I know Ann would be honored by this piece, Ann. Your friend was special to you and I know you will miss her dearly. You did so much for her, taking her out shopping and running errands, and you were such a good friend. I know you worried about her right before she died, telling me she really was getting sicker by the day, and when you got the news that she had passed, it struck quite a blow. You have reached out and are trying to connect with a daughter that doesn't realize what joy she missed with this sweet woman - but if you can at least let her know that her mother was a good woman who always loved her and wanted the best for her - and that she never forgot her - that will be a good thing, one last thing you can do for your friend Ann.

    I know this is a tough time for you with her passing, and I hope writing this brought you a bit of peace.

    becky

    • AnnD Moderators member
      April 11, 2007
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      Yes, She was a very special lady Becky. As her companion/carer/ and most of all her friend she held a very special place in my heart. Her passing was a shock as it really was not expected.
      I know she wasn't overly interested in my writings, in fact she may have been a little embarrassed that I would write about her. I felt it was something I needed to do.. for her and for me.


      Ann


  • maa gold member
    April 11, 2007

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    oh my God ...
    things become clearer now in my mind ... and I start to understand why my heart felt so urged to host this contest for you and ann ... since her spirit must have tried to make itself heard ... so poets will offer you words of love, encouragement and consolation ... until you reveal ann's story to us all in return ...
    I am more than touched by what I have learned of today, and I may say that ann is in my heart now together with you ...
    thank you, my precious friend,

    marion

    • AnnD Moderators member
      April 11, 2007

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      Thank you Marion, She was a very special person.... I wish I knew more of her story than I do..
      I can only hope that maybe one day I can be in contact with her daughter. That would mean alot to me if i could... I can only try.

      Ann

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    April 11, 2007
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    Very well written,the poignancy and hardships ever present in this dear lady's life and they should be shared and cared about as a tribute to her,as cathartic for you and with the glimmer of hope that her daughter may come across this somehow,well done


  • sarahblu
    April 11, 2007
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    the beginning of this story is well written. It drew me in nicely. I don't care for the rhyming though. i'm not sure why.. perhaps it feels forced. It detracts from the story for sure.. for me that is. Sad story but unfortunetly it has become rather common place in our deteriorating society


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    April 11, 2007

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    Wow! What a truly deep and poignant story! This one reaches out and touches the heart of your reader
    Thank you for sharing a part of your heart and soul


  • catz Moderators member
    April 11, 2007

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    This is so sad, Ann. Your friend is fortunate and blessed to have had you as a friend. You've spoken to me of her often but reading her story is painful. Life brings us such a variety of experiences with a multitude of emotions, feelings, happiness and sadness. Your friend seems to have had more than her share of unhappiness. To go through life with the scene of her mothers death played over and over again in her mind, and no help from counseling, loving arms to protect, no one to truly care... that had to be almost too much to bear.

    You've told her story with compassion and love, the words of a friend. Yes, you were probably her salvation in her last years. She's probably looking down on you, smiling, finally at peace.

    love and
    Dee

    • AnnD Moderators member
      April 11, 2007
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      Thankyou Dee,

      I sincerely hope she is finally at peace. She was a diamond in the rough' a most wonderful lady with a heart of gold.
      I miss her.


      Ann


  • Bartholomew Mole
    April 11, 2007

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    War has many tragedies. This is why Edna, Barty and all of us in the Sweetlove family are so against patriotism and militarism!


  • Kari gold member
    April 11, 2007

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    Awwwww this was so sad No one knows where her daughter lives at ??? Awww that's so sad This just gave me tears...

    Sorry for your loss Mum.

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