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Reminiscing

Im usually always reminiscing
Especially if I have to watch
Other people
.x-Kissing-x.

Stuck in a constant reverie
Of a better life, the way I wish
My life could be
Should be
For me

Isn’t it interesting
How some people see
PDAs
As beautiful and loving
Even cute and endearing

Isn’t it funny…
Isn’t it…

No it’s not.
It’s disgusting
Unwanted by those who aren’t blind
By love
And
..x-Affection-x..

I may be selfish
I may be bitter
Think of me what you want
Mock
Stare
Snicker
And Glare
I don’t fucking care

Just remember
To stay away
I don’t ever want to see
Your fucking love in front of me

So…

Im usually always reminiscing
Especially if I have to watch
Other people
.x-Kissing-x.


Do you know what I’m thinking?
Well I’ll tell you
Im thinking of how
I’m going to…



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I don't care if you think I'm selfish
Nor if u think I'm bitter...

These are just my feelings.

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  • Another Sad Song
    April 16, 2007

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    Awesome. =D I like it a lot. I know how you feel. It is quite gross watching everyone slobber on each other =P


  • PoetsAngel
    April 12, 2007

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    Good vent/rant...better getting it off your chest than stewing on it, 'tis why we write..isn't it lol. Great write Tommy


  • CazzieJade
    April 12, 2007

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    RAWRR
    I see them as gross. Lol.
    (Even though occasionally I do pash someone in public)
    But like, not constantly.
    Anyways. As I said. RAWRR. You tell em.


    • TommyTRASH
      April 12, 2007
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      Tehehe...I'm bitter...

      But I don't fucking care, I have my reasons...you know why.


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    April 11, 2007

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    Go you good thing ! !

    You show very raw emotion in this write. Reminds me a bit of the few angry ones I've posted lately. Keep spilling out your emotions. I reckon it helps aye !


  • GirlCalledKill
    April 11, 2007

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    This is good, but I think it could be better if you hadn't used so many expletives. It sounds more of an immature babble rather than a message. Overall it gets to the point. Good job and keep writing.

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