every hair shivers
not able to comprehend
the convulations
of thoughts
screaming through my head -
when...
my spirit searches
to speak to me...
Author notes
for the picture in the contest
A contest entry
- See it, feel it, express it! by Lavender Butterfly.
395 points, ended April 13, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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oh my, this is a very emotionally descriptive piece of writing that really reaches out and touches the reader. The way you started this, that first line, started out strong and it continued all the way through. what a wonderful job you did on this one.
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Thanks a lot for that comment...
short writes are always endearing to write... it's alwyas nice to know if a person connects to it.
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That is a pretty intimidating spirit. Sometimes we can not face ourselves scared of who we are or who we aren't. Does that make sense?
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Makes perfect sense. Pretty intimidating.. hmmm .. yeah. Thanks for reading and the wonderful comment. Long since I heard from you. Hope all is well. Love. Sam,
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oh this is good....
well done on an excellent write!
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Thanks a lot.. I should get reading other's work too.. I'll read some of yours.. Thanks again. Sam.
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Great portrayal of the picture. I like how you have made the spirit yourself, very clever and sincerely creative.
Thanks for sharing... x
Love and light,
Butterfly.
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Thanks for the wonderful comment
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