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Pollyanna

With her Polyester and purple dreams,
she took me away to golden streams.


Flying through the night with a moon bird,
I'm taken on a journey with every word.


With fun, laughter and bright smiles,

I feel her love from across the miles.

 

In written wisdom and deep emotion,
I see love, hate, friendship and devotion.


With poetic beauty my soul does fly,
in pain, wept tears I read and cry.


From a distance words have embraced,
and an emptiness has now been replaced.


I've been touched by her soul and her mind,
in these beautiful words a true friend I did find.

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    July 11, 2007
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    nice sentiment

    has a good flow and none of your rhyme seemed forced I liked this stanza
    " With fun, laughter and bright smiles,
    I feel her love from across the miles." It is something we can appreciate about computers 25 years ago this wasn't possible good write



  • Autodidact
    May 30, 2007

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    Oh My God

    It sound like something I wrote I believe you reading too many of my poems for real but this is beautiful and I'm not mad i'm feel blessed keep up the good work

  • Looking
    May 24, 2007

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    excellent write

    i really love this poem. the flow is so beautiful, and the emotion and love are so strong. Word choice was perfect, and the whole feeling was so poetic and with such love. really, incredible poem.
    i especially liked the lines:
    With her Polyester and purple dreams,
    she took me away to golden streams.

    Flying through the night with a moon bird,
    I'm taken on a journey with every word.

    thanks for the awesome read.


  • Ethereal One gold member
    May 4, 2007

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    lovely words

    You express you joy in finding such a wonderful new friend, so well with your words. The rhyming and the flow of each line, is as smooth as butter.
    I love the fantasy feel of this poem.

    Best wishes in the contest!

    Aurora 2012


  • SamWBrown
    April 17, 2007
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    very nice

    i like it, sory my comment aren't long, i'm to good with comments.thanks for yours


  • Pollyanna
    April 14, 2007

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    Beautiful

    Krissi...you are a wonderful friend...the best that's come my way in such a long time...you're my fresh air I've been holding my breath for....loves...Polly


  • Emmjay
    April 14, 2007

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    Very Poetic!

    Good write here Shadows-stars . Your rhyming technique is simple, yet very effective. I like how you've broken it up into seven two line verses, which are also seven warm statements. I hope Pollyanna reads this soon. I'm sure she'll be tickled pink
    Best wishes in the contest
    Sincerely -Emmjay


  • slipperssun gold member
    April 11, 2007

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    wow thats amazing... what a fantastic tribute to a wonderful friend... i bet she loved it... thank you for the entry into my contest and i wish you well...
    cheers
    Jen


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    April 11, 2007

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    A beautiful dedication for your friend. Well done and good luck in this contest

  • L000
    April 11, 2007

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    I am a sucker for rhyme. Your's didn't seemed forced at all. what wonderful descriptions and imagery. I wish I could write like this. Your first stanza captures you and you begin this peaceful journey. A perfect bed time read, I will have wonderful dreams tonight haha. thanks so much for the read, keep penning .

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