if i drew out the time
between you and me
how much of you
would you let me see
it's just a game
of give and tease
i'm an innocent schoolgirl
with her skirt above the knees
i could certainly draw you out
from the monochrome world you're in
the best way to read a person
is from what's written on their skin
even when, at your will
i seem to bend and break
my submission dominates you
until it is equal give and take
lift my skirt a little higher
feel your hand on my skin
that's not a description, that's an order
i will not be the one giving in
even tied up and twisted
knees to the ground
when you dominate me
you're the one who is bound
i'm the 'innocent' school girl
you cannot resist
you cannot turn away
from an offer like this
under my command
your hand skims my thighs
you're my naughty teacher
beneath my skirt
is where you're fate lies
i can draw you in
with my dark and mysterious side
but what you don't see
is there's nothing to hide
i am what i am
i do what i do
and I am not responsible
for the devil in you
i will not make it easy
i will not play it safe
but if i ever fold
it will be well worth the wait
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yep.... lol what can i say but that i agree wholeheartedly.... the slave really does have a lot more of the control than most would ever know... she puts herself into his/her hands to be satisfied and sated...
well done on this one
cheers
Jen
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"i'm an innocent schoolgirl
with her skirt above the knees"
"my submission dominates you"
"when you dominate me
you're the one who is bound"
Contradicting statements, I love it.
The last was a wonderful way to end it. Over all, a great write.
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This is a very well written piece...perfect in flow and content....was just right...very gentle and persuasive...thanks for entering this in my contest...Good luck! Smiles, Terry
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i'm the 'innocent' school girl
you cannot resist
you cannot turn away
from an offer like this
HAHA... great work here. I love the imagery and fun of this write..
"when you dominate me
you're the one who is bound"
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!
Keep it up hon!!
~Krys~
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I just love these words:
i am what i am
i do what i do
and I am not responsible
for the devil in you
Its quite a good write, the rhyming is well thought out and the words flow nicely. She's a stubborn little gal aint she, hehe -
Gawd, you have the perfect title, thats what sucked me in. I can never think of good titles to fit my piece. I envy you!i can draw you in
with my dark and mysterious side
but what you don't see
is there's nothing to hide
So insightful and the story of my life, I really related to this stanza. You have a way with words. You are truly talented keep penning.
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