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My mow

Her long black hair
Life of dispair
Eyes full of hate
In her head she thinks she has no fate
deadly thought all is lost
For her there is nothing more
Laying in her bed
As good as dead
To her the world has been crewel
Theres no need to follow the rules
School makes her mad
The home she was givin makes her sad
Friends dont no but try to care
She screams to god "THIS ISNT FAIR!!"
Looking at pictures in her room
Her mom so beautiful so well groomed
But a image of her sick in bed
no longer that blonde hair comming out of her head
She cried and trys to hold on to every thing she has.
So much lost, so much has passed
She kisses the picture of that once beautiful face
For it has left her in disgrace.

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  • WickdlyUndrstanding
    April 12, 2007

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    gives me the chills....
    So well written amb, love it.. give my regards to rach =]

    I never knew you wrote.. god amber there is so much more to you than i think a person [except lauren or rach or kelly??] could ever know.. love you
    ~WU


  • Lovemusic4life
    April 11, 2007
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    thats cute <33

  • Br0kenSil3nce
    April 11, 2007
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    HOLY MOTHERFUCKING SHIT I LOVE YOU AMBY THIS POEM IS AMAZING IM WRITING ONE ABOUT YOU!!


  • lovejunkie
    April 11, 2007
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    i helped edit it but other than that it be amazing as shittt