The land, so unforgiving
as the pits of hell itself
Riding for what seems endless moments
I almost lose track of reality
Sword in scabbard,
i blaze the trail for those who may follow
sometime, somewhere, in my footsteps...
into the battle grounds
Sword revealed, i clear the crest,
gazing towards the horizon.
But i do not see an army of Spartans
nor a fleet of battleships
Not a glimpse of savage beasts
not even a line of cavalry.
There stands a man upon his stallion
Formidable indeed, he is.
A warrior from the heavens has risen to battle
and I am his sparing partner.
I weld my blade, but the blade is not one.
Tis but shattered, and I'm without a weapon...
The warrior scoffs at my misfortune
and breaks out in guffaws
thinking that, without effort, I have been defeated.
Yet victory doesn't exist in the weapons of man
Nor in the deepest riches of the earth.
Victory, my friends, exists in the soul,
and will only become a reality if set free.
I Drop my wounded steel, face my enemy...
His taunts are no more, the sky turns to a crimson swirl.
..I know the battle has begun.
But until the sweet end has come
none will know of the winner
Until then, i stand and fight...
*********he attacks**********
Author notes
Option 2
A contest entry
- Picture contest lots of options by Mingan Tzar Avarus.
425 points, ended April 17, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a good story, it holds little in the way of poeticness to me, I hate to be brutal but this should be on storywrite not ap. ~Corey~
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Thank you for your entry in my contest and good luck.
~Corey~

