Sasuke...
If you had never left...
Would I still love you?
If you loved me back
Would my heart not be in pieces?
If you never changed
Would I be the same?
When I called your name
I was able to stand stronger than before.
I rose from my hiding place
Behind the Sakura tree.
I knew it didn't matter to you
But I loved how it rolled off my tongue.
When you left me alone
And I called out for you
I knew you wouldn't come back.
I always knew you never cared.
My love meant nothing.
You always said that love was a weakness
A shinobi shouldn't show emotion.
But it was too late for me
You already had my heart.
I was proud to say it
I was a Sakura-
I had blossomed
Just for you, Sasuke kun.
That maybe...
Just maybe...
You might notice.
But when I saw that new fire in your eyes
When the old you was gone
My heart grew numb and confused
I wanted nothing to do with you.
Now...
Here you are...
What are you doing?
You already plucked off my petals
This Sakura is gone.
Youth wants to wrap its arms around you
Reality wants to stab you with this kunai...
If you had never left...
Would I still love you?
If you loved me back
Would my heart not be in pieces?
If you never changed
Would I be the same?
If you gave me a chance
If you loved me back
I might be able to still smile
Instead of hide behind the Sakura tree...
Author notes
3/4 ish
woah-that was long. Gomen!
A contest entry
- Sasuke X Sakura by Sle3p.
322 points, ended April 13, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Favorite Anime Characters by ArtemisWolf.
330 points, ended December 9, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
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He He He very nice I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Nice.
Nice poem.It all makes sense.But who wrote this?
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this is artemis gem yos
thanx for gold >.<
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awwww, that was soooo sad. i really liked it alot. the tile really gave it meaniong and i really liked how sad it was very emotional. great write.
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nice one,this contest is getting harder to judge,more wonderful poems,i like this one to another one about them kewl,nice i realy dont know what i liked about it,i just like it all 
-maddie
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Maddie!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey M.S!!!Was'up??Maddie misses you lots!!!!
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