Darling will you marry me
Be my beauteous bride
From now until eternity
Darling will you marry me
Fill my life with ecstasy
Forever by my side
Darling will you marry me
Be my beauteous bride
I promise you a life of bliss
Never sad, replete with joy
With passion that we can't dismiss
I promise you a life of bliss
Can anything be better than this
Contentment without cloy
I promise you a life of bliss
Never sad, replete with joy.
In a list
A contest entry
- A Macandrew Triolet contest by macandrew.
375 points, ended April 18, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Phenomenon #6 by Ryno.
300 points, ended April 19, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful usage of form for a beautiful poem. Life full and un stagnant. Interesting and luring. Loved this. Thank-you for your entry into Prewrites6 and for sharing it with me. Best wishes.
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Delightful
This was just a joy to read. So pleased to see a trophy on this wonderful triolet.
Congratulations. ~Pamela 
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Simply beautiful. Your triolets are a pleasure to read.
thanks for entering.
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Such a sweet and loving write!
Any woman would love to hear words such as these by the man she loves
A wonderful sharing! Wish you all the best in the contest! -
its really sweet
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This write is so sweet. Did you really ask a lucky lady to marry you with this? If not, then you should definitely use it someday.
You used 'beauteous', instead of beautiful like most people would. I loved that.
Good luck in your contest.
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Hey....
I loved it!!!
It is soooo cute...
I wish someday...someone to write something like this for me too..
Great write..
Thanks for sharing!!
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Oh. This is a really nice little poem that you have here. I thought it was such a cute way to propose to someone special. Were you really proposing to someone or was it just the kind of happy mood that you were in? I really like form poetry too and I thought it looked like one. I don't know much about triolets but I thought you did a good job.
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww i love this ... it is wonderful to love someone so much you pledge your love like this... good luck in this contest
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If I wasn't taken, I'd say yes, haha. Very nice! Some girl is going to be very very lucky someday
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Wonderful! Ah...to be the lucky young woman who recieves this poem. Awesome. Write on, poet.
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A beautifully written triolet.
Love the line:
Contentment without cloy
Talia
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ok, now what does a woman do to get the man she loves to say these words to her and to mean them as well. very good write from you. good luck in this contest. viyanna rosemarie
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A wonderful write.
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Loved your triolet! I tried my hand at one too...but they are SO hard to write. Good job, friend. Write on, poet.
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This is such a sweet triolet! How romantic and wonderful, what a lucky missus! Good luck in the contest!
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From what I know of the Triolet this is wonderful. Full of emotion and it flows very well. Good luck in the contest!
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