My world is brighter.
I'm no longer late.
I've become quite a fighter.
This must be fate.
It isn't just lust,
That makes me alert.
It's a good dose of trust,
And a whole lot of flirt.
You've been sent from above,
And it couldn't be sweeter.
I can now feel the love...
...My love for you, Peter.
A contest entry
- Because Of You. by Poetic Aphrodite.
300 points, ended April 12, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - First love/ falling in love/ sunny days by cardiphonia.
360 points, ended April 20, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - How Do I Tell Him???? by Paulies Cracker.
415 points, ended April 28, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this was beautiful!! it made me smile ear to ear... thank you so much for entering and i hope you do well.. i enjoyed reading this and thanks again!!!
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thank you for entering!
I liked the poem in general but I must admit that I've never been a fan of the rhyme between 'love' and 'above'. I think this is perhaps more suited for the other competition...but I like the sweet and simple tone. -
Thankyou for your beautiful entry, Bella
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