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[ The monsters outside ]

The monsters outside
They are playing
The monsters outside
They are staying
The monster outside
They scare me
The monsters outside
They are what I see
The monsters outside
Grin and sneer
The monsters outside
They kill there
The monsters outside
Call to me
The monsters outside
Are what to be
The monsters outside
They are nightmares
The monsters outside
Little girls are what they snare
The monsters outside
Are going to eat me
The monsters outside
Has destroyed me

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writen half asleep and delirous

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  • Eusebius
    April 18, 2007

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    gotcha!

    oh, my goodness! they got you! hmmmm...then who wrote this lovely little lollapalooza of a luscious lyric lilting poem..hmmmmmmmmm? gotcha!!! bravo...bravo...bravo...


  • Tenshi Asakura
    April 15, 2007

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    That is really cool. i like the repettition it helped the poem to flow really well. keep up the good work!


  • purple wings
    April 15, 2007
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    i like it.