Let's take a walk
let's run away
let's go somewhere far far away-
take off our shoes,
run through the sand
run through the water,
holding hands
let's lay down,
look at the sky
Watch the clouds-
passing by
Let's climb a tree
and go up far
and there we'll watch-
the glowing stars
let's make sand castles,
and feed the ducks
Then there we'll watch the sun come up
Let's have a picnic,late at night
With candles that are oh so bright
Let's go to an island
We wont need no one else
We'll have fun-
all by ourselves
We'll make snowmen,
and have snow fights
and when I'm cold
you'll hold me tight
We'll find a warm car
look at the stars
And in your arms...
I'll fall asleep,
and of you,
tonight...
I'll dream...
Author notes
frog
3. Give me love. It can be about losing love of finding love i don't care it just has to be about you and that one other person...or people i don't know some people are weird that way.
marshmellow feathers
option 3
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very cute :-) thanks for entering and good luck!
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We'll find a warm car
look at the stars
And in your arms...
I'll fall asleep,
and of you,
tonight...
I'll dream...
This was my favorite part of this poem. IT was beautifully written. You could inspire many.
I was blown away by this; the depth, emotion, imagery, it was all amazing. keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck. 
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We'll find a warm car
look at the stars
And in your arms...
I'll fall asleep,
and of you,
tonight...
I'll dream...
This was my favorite part of this poem. IT was beautifully written. You could inspire many. I was blown away by this; the depth, emotion, imagery, it was all amazing. keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck.
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Great job, good luck!
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oh this was wonderful how it fades into eachother and makes you appreciate things. I feel like saying i love you to some one but i can't... so..... I love you XD
Great write
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A really tender and sweet poem you have written. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.
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A sweet and lovely poem that was a pleasure to read. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.
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Cute in a way, and enjoyable in another. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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I made a mistake when reading and after reading the word ducks I got scared of what would come next lol. My whole rythem was thrown off ...
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Awww this is so beautifully breathtaking ^^ Amazing write, thanks for entering my contest
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such a beautiful poem you've allowed me to read an i enjoyed every minute of it...good luck.
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great poem i love love love it great job so perfect and just what i was looking for
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Aw.... this is really cute
very well written
i like it
thanks for entering my contest
good luck :]
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Wow. Amazing.
Good luck in my contest!
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Love It
I really love this one. It's so sweet and it makes you visualize the perfect escape. The poem never loses that feel of complete happiness and contentment. I want to live in this place(or places).Great Job all the way through.
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Sweet
Awww sweet ! Fun and entertaining poem. I like -
Awww what a sweet poem. LOVE IT! Finally something bright and happy heh. Such a great write. Yeah, everyone of us wants to have these moments. At least only for one day.
Keep writing and God Bless
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