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Spring!!!

Spring spring the wonderful spring
and to top it off my favorite season

I love to lie down on the green grass
with the sun shining down so warm

The ocean sparkles radiantly
and looks so calm as the wind

It's so nice and warm
you don't need to wear long sleeves anymore

You can play soccer
without getting too hot or cold

That's why i love spring so much
and it's my favorite season

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  • Despairkitty
    April 23, 2007

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    WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!

    Well it looks like you are finding your way around here well. Congrats on the honorable trophy win!! I thought you did great with this piece. I am a greeter and wanted to welcome you. Feel free to ask any questions and I hope you enjoy your time here.
    Despair


  • BabyFox Amberlight
    April 12, 2007
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    very good poem good luck in the contest ^-^