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Her

A beautiful sound,
So soft so sweet,
Looking around,
I fail to see,

I look harder, further,
Deep into the woods,
When I come to a clearing,
I find the source,

Reeled in by her beauty,
With long blonde hair,
A slender body,
Beautifully fit in a white dress,

Such a wonderful noise,
Radiating from her,
Like a mother singing to a child,
I start to close my eyes,

As i start to zone in,
She turns towards me,
The gentle expressions we exchange,
Sends butterflies to my stomach,

My breathing becomes harder,
I cannot speak,
She sends me a smile,
I become weak,

So beautiful she is,
So sweet the sound,
If one could only imagine,
You'd fall to the ground.

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  • Rize
    April 26, 2007
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    its about the gurl i met in lockup


  • Dirty and Broken
    April 10, 2007
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    *smiles*
    blondes suck
    some of the rythem is off