More broken than anyone can see
Looking out from blank eyes, you'll find me
How did you think it felt, wondering how it feels
To know you don't belong and all of it is real
All alone, knowing the world is cold and cruel
Thinking that you're nothing more than a stupid fool
Yeah it hurts, but now I've felt pain for so long
That I don't feel it anymore, Of course I could be wrong
Take a knife and stab me twice
Nod your head at my advice
Watch me bleed and watch me wince
That single smile not leaving your lips
Shattered to pieces on the cold floor
Crying uncontrollably, not asking for more
Why do you think I run, hiding all the tears
To run away and not come back for several lonely years
Seeing no one even trying to help me through this
Knowing that there will never be anyone to miss
Sure it seems to be painful, but infact its quite pleasant
Without the pain I utter to myself that I slightly miss it
Take a knife and stab me twice
I'm nothing more than a sacrafice
See me cry and see me die
Laughing without even knowing why
Author notes
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A contest entry
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this was a very very very great write, amazing even, i read a bunch of these kinds of poems and each and every one of them is amazing as your's is, Because i know how your feeling, keep up the great work =)
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thanks for entering
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this was AWSOME!!!!! I loved the take a knife and stab me twice repitition it gave it a dark and chilling feel to it.....amazing job keep writting
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this was a great write...i can really relate to what you are saying and feeling in this poem..your words were very strong, powerful and emotional as well..you are a talented author keep writting and good luck in the contest
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wow i love this i like these the most though:
Take a knife and stab me twice
Nod your head at my advice
Watch me bleed and watch me wince
That single smile not leaving your lips
and
Take a knife and stab me twice
I'm nothing more than a sacrafice
See me cry and see me die
Laughing without even knowing why
thanks for sharing this itz wonderful
good luck
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Inner Regret
I see this in this piece.
I also see confusion, pain, but then again,
lust for quiet peace of loneliness.
I understand why you would want to be alone,
But there comes a time when you wish you could undo the wishes you have been granted.
Thanks so much for entering,
I loved this write
Much love and prayer,
~*Jess*~
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