Dreams of that sheltered past
clattered and clanged,
Turn about fair play !
Touching beyond the sun,
Revelations met
another heart has been won,
Green glistening beyond a warmth,
Whispered only...
within a breath,
And your memory
tasted
just a touch
of my soul,
Do you feel me,
Even
when
I'm not there ?
Aug. 24, 2001
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Written January 3rd, 2002
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The way this moved was wonderful. Even the way the poem is written is pleasing and graceful. It flows and have direction, that is whistful and romantic. I absolutely loved it.
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Do you feel me even when I'm not there... I love that line. It's written so simply but it is so beautiful.
The sun shines right through the rain
As the body moves of its own volition
To the same drum that you now hear
Onto a blank page your words spill
As wine from a bottle, sweet and inviting
Freeing the mind, heart and soul
Giving the intensity of love a chance
While retaining some small piece of ecstasy
For the next darkness through which I'll pass
Thank you for sharing this.
~Kimberly
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Your words often fill a page with such wonder and awe, it leaves a reader such as myself breathless, just from the images you paint. THis was splendid.
~Carrie -
This is beautiful. I love the description words you used in this and the message is so sweet.
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Beautiful. This touched me. Such Romance in it.
Anna
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Thanks Neha Bhat !
I'm glad you enjoyed it ! -
this is so beautfiul side i love u so very much
neha -
Thank you !!!
Now where can I find my Love ?
Hey girls ...yes...
I'm single !! -
Beautiful!! And this is as true love should be. Two people in love are always together even in absence. Great write. :)
Tina
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