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Vein Rain

Wounds gouging with teeth marks
of tears,
band-aids from angel's appear
somewhere between the final throb
and last rites,
before mummification of plasma writhing,
there is a new sound coming from the chest,
question if it was occupied by a cold dead stone
are answered
with eyes showering their hugs of knowing.

A contest entry

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  • Lyre-Bird-
    April 13, 2007
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    Firstly I want to thank you for entering the contest and following all the rules........
    Your entry has been added to the finals list!!!!!

    wish you the best of luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    Tracey

    *the finals list is in no set order, Judging takes place after the closing of the contest..............


  • Desire gold member
    April 11, 2007

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    Oy!!

    Wow~
    Packed Power in ten lines
    Beautiful verse that grabs at the Heartstrings...
    Blessings felt in this one
    Loved it

    Thank You for sharing this Sweetness!!
    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~


    • penman gold member
      April 11, 2007
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      Awwww, thank you precious. Did what I could with this one.