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~Loves echos...

Missing image
~~~~ Dedicated to a sweet friend  Krys ~~~~


  Images faded
Hearts collided
  Being alone


Naked truths,
Hidden from me
No longer can I run and hide…

Memories buried deep,
Within every nook and cranny
I feel your empty words
Stuffed and cramped ,
Love echoes at very chance

Light my way
Show me a sign
I hold the key,
But it will never unlock,
your heart.


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  • LoveNeverDies
    April 23, 2007
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    thanks for entering


  • penman gold member
    April 21, 2007
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    Excellent

    Very well done and great visual images painted. Good luck in the contest.


  • Bruised.Roses
    April 14, 2007

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    wow I loved the tittle to this piece so beautiful and so graceful this poem flowed wonderfully like water even....and I could feel the emotion...keep writting
    xXTashaXx


  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    April 11, 2007

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    this was a great write..youwe words were very powerful, emotional and strong as well..its very sweet of you to write this for a friend..keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest

    ~Chrissy~


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 11, 2007

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    Brilliant-Writing

    Light the way, show me a sign. This is quite beautiful, dark and very emotional. This is deep and a brilliant piece of writing here. It is short, but say's so many things as well. There is pain here, among so many other emotions, I feel desolation as well. You have wrote this brilliantly-well, and this should inspire you to keep writing more of this kind. Wonderful writing.


    Wayne


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 10, 2007

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    Light my way
    Show me the way
    I hold the key,
    But it will never unlock,
    your heart.

    this is so sad to me. the entire thing gave me chills. fantastic write. thank you for sharing it with me. viyanna rosemarie


  • Angel With No Halo
    April 10, 2007

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    This made me cry.. I am like one huge emotional wreck today. This is such a wonderful poem. I am going to bookmark it!! Thank you so much sweety. It was lovely to see these words from another perspective. Thanks you!!!

    Love,
    ~Krys~

  • Liquid memories
    April 10, 2007

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    Touching, and saddened

    to have the key, but it will not unlock, truly beautiful and touches the heart. Sweet write, Sie.


  • Sgt B
    April 10, 2007

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    Very complicated..

    As love sometimes is.
    This actually fits the picture quite well.
    Adding to the depth of it.
    Good job on this one.

    ~Ron~


  • Peteskid gold member
    April 10, 2007
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    a lot of meanings from a few words

    I think there are some deep meanings here:

    Memories buried deep,
    Within every nook and cranny
    I feel your empty words
    Stuffed and cramped ,

    Feelings that seem to echo into an empty place; this is a poem with a lot of ideas and views from a few words; very well done...PK

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