Life… smoothly pumped
through complex network,
a gift of strength
to body continuity.
A soul suspended
on coronaries strings gives,
a fragile sense to existentiality.
Feel the wonder
of a priceless ruby,
generating rhythmic songs
for every emotion.
Listen to the whisper
of your inner drum
as power sparkles
smile, trust your destiny.
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A contest entry
- Break The Cliche by Lyre-Bird-.
550 points, ended April 13, 2007, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Firstly I want to thank you for entering the contest and following all the rules........
Your entry has been added to the finals list!!!!!
wish you the best of luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Tracey
*the finals list is in no set order, Judging takes place after the closing of the contest..............
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Oh I do love this! Your last two stanzas are my very favourite! Beautifully penned my friend.
All the best in this contest
Gaylene
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