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haha makes sense. i loved it.
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Great... almost
in the second stanza i think it should end in hoping the doctor can make them better until there dead it just makes it feel more urgent and morbid btw you said you would give me points for a rewrtie idea pay up -
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I did? I can't remember... was that on the policy board? Sure, I'll give you points.
How many do you want?
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I love this poem.
Allthough I do know some doctors, who truely care about their patients. Great write though
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Brilliant!
Very true!
I wrote a similar poem called 'I Breathe For You' saying that if I wasn't ill you wouldn't have jobs.
What REALLY pisses me off now is you ring the doctor and say that you are ill and they say 'I'll book you an appointment for 2 weeks time!'
IM FUCKING ILL NOW NOT THEN!
I used to think it was me (paranoia..depression)!
The doctor came the other day cos I suffer with bipolar and was really anxious.
He stayed about 10 FUCKING seconds. I was a complete bag of nerves. Told ME to ring my psycholgist!
Wankers the lot of em!
Thanks for your brilliant poem!
SPOT FUCKING ON!
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Quite true in this, I would imagine. The doctors seem to be the ones in the most needs of worldly goods, the patients in need of some minimal form of healing that the doctor may or may not have a clue about but tries anyway just the sake of the money it gives him each day to have that patient there... quite well written.
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