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Lesson from the Shallow

All people can relate
from the quote that people
with the shallow gene in their blood
They look pretty,
they smell nice,
but when they open their mouths
out comes the lesson from the shallow:

Duh, here's a number
take a clue
find out what's two and two...


The quote seems strange
from them it's normal
a show of how superior
they are next to you

But yet you think on it
and wonder why
they would need to feel better
than the rest of us

Maybe they are missing something in other areas
and are trying to cope
Maybe they think that they are God's gifts to us
and are here to impart some wisdom

But in the end, the quote that they so famously use
comes back on them when confronted with reality
And the saying goes to them:

Duh, here's a number
take a clue,
find out what's two and two...

DarkOne
4/10/07

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I thought that this would help most people of the world recognize the shallow people in the world, share the statement....

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  • pruedence
    April 10, 2007

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    Well done...we all can't be smart...but you would think they would try...that is from our end...hmm, I wonder how it is on their end...nicely done with good meaning


  • Gone-Lost-soul
    April 10, 2007

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    very true...awsome write thanks for sharing this with us...good flow.Very good message too!!
    jammi


  • love my jose luis
    April 10, 2007

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    I like this poem, it's so true...I think that you are a great writer and I think that you should definately keep writing.
    ~Alix


  • Creatress silver member
    April 10, 2007

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    It scares me the amount of shallow people I come in contact with through out life. I am happy to see there are others like me baffled by the dumb founded heard we find ourselfs in. Keep up the good work!!

    Creatress


  • babygirl2582 silver member
    April 10, 2007

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    I love this I understand loving yourself but I should not take hurting others to prove it...Great Write

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