In my moments of disillusionment
I search for you
Through the vastness of the world
The darkest parts of my mind
Seeking the comfort of finality
Finding you briefly in the arms of fortitude
only to lose you again within my dreamscape
You are many colors, shapes and sizes
Speaking many tongues
I have heard your languages
Felt your expressions
Experienced your longings
Known your values
Respected your traditions
Eventually in my lifetime
I will find you
Or you may find me
As we seek the same
infinitive destination
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice poem. I hope you find what you are searching for.
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Excelent
this was truly grand write indeed. i founf it sowonderful, i truly enjoy this read. i thank you so very much for shareing it. hope that you will have a truly grand day
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amen
life is searching; good luck my sister
and thank you.
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beautiful
Soulful woman
not what I expected. something special. thought provoking. leads the reader in many directions. Many ways to look at it. good writing
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is this poetry or a story
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wow... this can apply to so many things. You were able to capture a really good idea!
The last stanza was my favorite!
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VERY GOOD
I like your style, I think you are a very good poet
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This is beautiful, such wonderful spirituality in this piece, something not all of us find in this lifetime, congratulations on making the front page with this piece...
Karen
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Just beautiful
I'm a bit lost to know what to say about your poem. It makes me feel peaceful and hopeful. alby
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Lost in your beautiful words - to me this is a very spiritual poem - whether you meant it that way or not - it touches the heart.
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That is beautiful i love the way the your writing wraps around words
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Congratulations on the SPOTLIGHT
Godmother Noreen
I am in awe over this lovely piece, all I have to say is keep doing you, Great job 
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Consuming
This beautifully penned piece can be taken so many ways, it could mean you searching for a lover, friend, or God maybe....I enjoyed it wholeheartedly. THank you for sharing your work with me.
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I love the journey you take the reader on in this poem. Your words flow so smoothly, and the message is beautiful.
Ethereal One
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Excellent
It is ironic that we spend our lives in search of someone or something, only to realize that finding them or it marks the beginning of the next search. Perhaps as old souls we poets keep searching for something that came and went long ago, in a life before this, and we keep waiting for it to return, always feeling as though something is missing. Always feeling as though something is there just beyond the edge of our vision and if we turn fast enough we'll catch a glimpse of it. No matter how fast we turn, a glimpse is all we get.
This is a beautiful write and embodies so much longing and so much acceptance. Good luck in your search for the secrets!
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Soulful words
This is a wonderful read, both satisfying and insprational. Life is indeed a constant quest for me, and you frame it so well with your soulful words. With quality writing like this, somewhere, out there, your voice is heard. It could be a prayer for life.
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good
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Such a beautiful, beautiful piece of poetry this is, hon
Sigh...
Love everything about this!
Awesome write most worthy of the spotlight!
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Good stuff
Very mystical. Are you looking for a lost love, a new love or God?
Whichever it is, I hope you find it. If it's God, don't worry, He knows where you are.
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how beautiful is this piece... it touch your very soul... it going to carried me throughout the day.. well done well written and express.. thank you! for sharing this with all of us....
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I can't find the words to tell you how much I love this piece. It is pure art, to me.
Every single word has touched my soul.
I will be reading this over and over again.
This is the most beautiful piece of poetry that I have read in a mighty long time.
The picture pulls the whole piece together so perfectly.
OMG ~~~ magnificent writing.
I really love this.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Still love this piece
Godmother Noreen
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Wow! There is not part in here that I can highlight b/c I love the whole thing! This was very insightful and intriguing. Keep Writing!
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This piece is really good. I like how it feels like you're searching for answers even though you're still confident in some. I really enjoyed it, and it made me think. Good job!
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I'm Speechless
I pray that you will get your work Published, if you have not already.
Blessings to you, my dear and keep your head up.
Amazing artist.
Ephiphany
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Put there somewhere is a heart waiting to find you...and that infinitive destination will be mapped by ahnds of love.
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Lovely
Noreen,
Your write well defines our quest in finding a blissful serenity. You final verse is both lovely an insirational---expresses "Love and be loved"
"Eventually in my lifetime
I will find you
Or you may find me
As we seek the same
infinitive destination"
Through so many years of pain, I finally found the one to share our "infinitive destination"
Thanks for sharing such a heartfelt piece.
Take care,
Bo
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orhhhh love this is so beautiful it almost makes me not to want to be single lol very very beautiful words by a very beautiful woman xx
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Awesome
Beautfiul doesn't express this piece enough I loved the message you have protrayed here and the spiritual feelings that have engulfed me. I thank you so much for sharing this piece with me...
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If Cathy and Kristin like it, it must be good because they are wings of mine. So, I guess all that's left to do is give you three bunnies.
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wonderful write
Loved the words of search, seeking and finally convinced you will find this love, Awww very sweet and touching.
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Gorgeous my bestest bud....exquisite in that you don't sit "pining" away but eventually the two of you will find each other..somehow, someway....Lets us stand in the harbor....waiting for our yacht! Love ya tons...beautiful sentiment and expressions here! Once again, written from your soul....
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Very deep..
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Noreen, this is beautiful and comforting, I am so glad I read this thismorning, i love the 3rd stanza the most, 'Tis a truly awsome piece you have penned her my dear.
Cathy
xx
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