he held her close and whispered soft sweet nothings in her ear
she turned around her eyes filled to the brim with love
her mouth turned up into a smile
dazzling white teeth shown through ruby-colored lips
reflected onto his green-gold eyes
that stared into her deep brown hopeful ones
a silent joy exchanged
time stands still to let the couple have
their moment of joy
hungry lips lower to meet
ruby-colored ones
passion erupts and true love is experienced
a couple's kiss
frozen in time
forever their love will remain
Author notes
Evil-Gurl08
A contest entry
- First love/ falling in love/ sunny days by cardiphonia.
360 points, ended April 20, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - long lost first love back by Pureisolation.
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Comments
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he held her close and whispered soft sweet nothings in her ear
she turned around her eyes filled to the brim with love
her mouth turned up into a smile
i really like these lines. wonderful job. I really liked reading this poem. I like how your poem flows. great job. -
thank you for entering!
I like the prose-like way you've written this. I think this could do with some punctuation to emphasize phrases.thanks again for participating.
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