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Hold me in your mind

Do you feel the same way?
It's unlikely I suppose.
But still I'd like to be there,
In that place that no one knows.
It like to be held in your mind,
The way I hold you in mine.
I'd like you to know how I cry,
Even when I say I'm fine.
Just because I love you,
And I want you to love me.
I want you to feel the same way,
So together we can forever be.

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Hey, I rhymed... a bit pants though

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  • Vicky Shwepps
    April 11, 2007
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    no, i like it. yes, even though its a bit pants. lol lub ewe xxxxxxxxx