All of my children
whom I love so much.
Please don't turn away,
please stay in touch.
I wish that you all,
would just get along.
Love one another,
in God's family you belong.
I have paved the way,
given you the blueprint.
Provided Guardian Angels,
that are Heaven sent.
But still you refuse,
to accept and believe.
The blessings of God,
that faith can achieve.
Stop all the fighting,
dispel all your hate.
Please heed my words,
before it's too late.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration by CherylAnn.
500 points, ended April 11, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very good
you too my dear have a great gift and i am very happy to have had you cross my path james as well i tend to talk about you down at the city mission i had breakfast down there today with my friends youth group from church they took their easter vacation to live down their and help fix up a house i will be having lunch today as well i had them do a home work ass. of one paragraph on what they learned positive or negative and i will put that together for a poem for them this gives me a chance to break them in before i join them this way i will know if i will be happy with them i already know they are happy with me keep doing well
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Aww William, you have such a precious heart and spirit. Jame and I are honoured to be included in those you call friends. What do you mean by 'join' them in this comment? I think I know, but wanna make sure.
Jeannie
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excellent
The truth is found in your words. Very beautiful write, if we would love one another by the example he set what we could accomplish. God Bless and this is a uplifting and inspirational write.
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Thanks June, as soon as I saw this pic, the words just poured out. I think He was really speaking to me!
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A Blessing
a blessing to have read dear poet...I truly loved it
Good Luck and thanks for entering
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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Wonderful!!
Beautiful verse You have penned my Friend
Love the message You bring forth and the rhyme~
Wonderful piece!!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Some great words written into this one,
lots to think about as we are reminded that we
can make the difference,
Thanks for sharing
Warm thoughts
Frozentearz -
beautifully written inspiration! i wish it could be that simple! thank you for sharing this! keep writing! God bless you always
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wish that it was that easy for all of us to stop fighting, but that will never happen till Lord comes back and destroy this world.
I cant wait till the new world no more fighting and hatred.
good luck in the contest sis
very lovely poem
much love
your brother John
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ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!
Your words are truly inspiring! I believe deep down this will never happen but we can keep faith and pray.
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fanx u Jeannie... this is a butiful poem xxx cheeky xxx
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Ah kids, love em and could kill em all in the same minute!! I am sure they heed words but life is full of endless things, they never stop to smell the roses
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This is absolutely brilliant, I imagine Jesus says these very same words everyday. I don't know if I would be too happy looking down to a world where I suffered and gave my life so that they could be free. I would be thinking selfish greedy soulless beings. However there are many angels down here doing God's work the way he intended. It's not all bad but to be fair the world is in a pretty sorry state. Awesome take on the picture and the background is perfect. Best of luck in the contest.
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Dispel all your hate, if only it were so easy to listen to those few chosen words. Mankind will never heed those faithful words once spoken. Great poem so indepth and full of passions for His word.
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