It was while thinking about the past that brung forth every conceiveable reverie -- as if the very fabric of singed skin permenated the core of this humanized form; nothingness has condemned the lenses' focus, leaving only shadows of which to mimick memory
The unfamiliarized pallet foretold what has already been spoken and tension of yesterday merely fought an uprising of stale aftertaste; still fighting, life resumed consumptions through peeled away cells
Siphoning alliterations followed through without reasons unknown, and yet bittersweet tears unshed now blanket in puddles of photographic reconciliation...
Damn this tenure.
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Rae,
Your confessional poetry is growing more indepth and cryptic each day. Your words draw the reader in and hold them there. You leave them to think and rethink on what it is you are saying and often they find the answer in relation to themselves. To be made to think on any one write can be both a good thing as well as a not so good thing in my opinion, some times. Some times to think on a piece too much or too deeply can only cause more confusion on its meaning rather than allowing it to stew and the meaning to surface within on its own. I believe you have done well here. I enjoyed this much.
Nicely Done!
Blessings
Bel
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Lady B, you have captured a spirit in you words which truly reflects the picture's essence. Bittersweet memories of broken or forgotten loves. Yet it's not a romantic piece which makes it more real to me. I enjoyed it thoroughly. -
Hey Lady B. I must say, while I am impressed with your vocabulary, I am equally lost in the poems meaning. I think I understand the individual metaphors but I am having a hard time putting them all together into a single theme.
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This was very deep and good..I had to read it a few times but I think I get it now.
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once again i am confused but looking it, you did a fantastic job on this, i was lost in your words, keep it flowing
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