They look at me,
and think im fine,
when really im just
hidding inside,
i feel like im lost,
and broken to pices,
i know im not perfect
so im not gonna try,
they tell me that
its gonna be alright,
so dont do this to your self,
Dont give advice on something
you dont do or know nothing about,
its not your place so get out
and stay out!
i dont need help,
i have it under controlle,
if i want to do this,
let me be,
its my life just let
me be me,
Scars fade overtime,
broken hearts they
always heal,
life goes on,
and people change,
but i am who i am,
so just let me live,
you cant change this habit,
no matter how hard you try,
the urges come back,
withen a matter of time,
when something goes wrong,
i think of my friendm
the one whos there for me untill the end,
just let me be who
i wanna be,
I promise i'll be fine
A contest entry
- deppressed/suicide/hurt/lost love/cutting(SA, SI) by Felix BlackHeart.
375 points, ended May 13, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - P.A.I.N. by PoEtS-bLeEd-InK.
375 points, ended April 15, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Very Best (pre-writes allowed) by Dark Whispers.
377 points, ended April 16, 2007, 89 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is pretty good. I like how you are jsut asking them to let you be who you are. not to do what they want you to, or be who they want you to be. to elt you be who you are. I like that. thanx for entering ym contest!
Felix BlackHeart
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it was a really nice poem and you did a nice job getting thoughts on paper, thers a typo on line 6.thanks for entering
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I like it!!! And yes I understand what you are talking about. This is very good! I love the emotion and the words you used.
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