Jesus cries for a world in sin.
His compassion lies deep within.
Like a Shepard who has lost his sheep
He calls out to those who are in too deep.
He wants to shed his glorious light.
And take away the darkness of night.
The world is hurting and in need of him
A merciful light in a place so dim.
His arms are open and waiting for you.
Dry his tears and spread the truth.
He sees the beauty deep within.
Even when you are covered in sin.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration by CherylAnn.
500 points, ended April 11, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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AMEN
First I wanna say "What a beautiful background"
A beautiful write of the sadness the Jesus feel in his heart for all humanity,for it is wish that non should perish...You have captured that scripture with a wonderful light...
Good Luck and thanks for entering
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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Your rhyme schemes are improving since only a week or 2 ago. But, I found one line that didn't contextually make sense: "He wants to turn day into night."
Otherwise, Good piece.
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