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Wanted You To Feel The Same

I sometimes got so tired of our game
I wanted you to feel the same. 
It breaks my heart to say that when I was in pain
I wanted you to feel the same.
But nothing gets you really,
It's a shame.
I can't believe you didn't feel a thing.


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  • Third Orbit Mars
    April 10, 2007

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    always a subject that hits home. the repetition of the title line really drives the message home, and pervays a true sense of pain. i liked it.