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Favourite Distraction

The shimmer of our days slowly fading away, Inside I'm only half alive.
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Out of all my distractions, You still manage to be my favorite one.




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  • Deadly Nightshade
    April 17, 2007
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    lol thanks for the comment =D to be honest, there are only two lines to the poem...hehe =]


  • mmmph
    April 16, 2007
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    hee hee i wrote it last night when i couldnt sleep, thought it would puff up my poetry abit coz im sick of stumbling across my old loved up poetry. my god you've been busy! gimme 10 and i'll rummage through all these poems youve made!!!

    as for this one - short but very sweet, love the second line the best!

    xxxxx