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She makes me stronger

She is stronger than
she looks can't you
tell? Her blue eyes
say pain her appearence
says I can take it.
She take the abuse from
kids everyday, She cries
herself to sleep every
night. She would never
tell you that she is
anything but okay. But I
know, I know from personal
experience. I've been
there. I've been beaten up
everyday in the hell we
call highschool. I haven't
the time to cry about it
I haven't the time to break
and let them win. So I walk
with my head high. I cry
when no one can hear me. I
break down when im alone.
Now I see this girls name
on a shiny head stone, and
I know I can't give up. My
best friend gave up, she let
them win. She let them take
her from me. Now I miss her
with everything in me, but
she makes me stronger each
day, and her spirit cries with
me every night.

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  • your.guardian.angel
    April 10, 2007

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    this is very sad but I like how u wrote it. This got 2 me, it realize that not every1 has a good time in highschool. I am sorry this happened, no1 deserved to be treated like that. plz stay strong, don't let them get 2 you. Always here for you...always u can talk 2 me!!
    xoxo,
    ~~kRiS~~

  • poet43
    April 10, 2007

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    so now i cry

    Ice, you get to me. Such feeling from you -- the stomach, the head, the heart of this old man gets a workout when you express like this. The workout is good because it is exercise for my soul. Thank you.

    You take that strength and use it for self
    Shout aloud all you feel and have felt
    Let no one's story of tragedy end
    Without the memory of a loving friend

    poet


  • Avarus L. Katier
    April 10, 2007
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    dont let things get you down things are better than they appear


    • Ice queen 17
      April 10, 2007
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      Hey thnks

      hey hun thankyou eberyone of you that comment on my work i appreciate you so much and i know things r better than they appear so many people have been thru so much more thanh i and i respect them so much.


  • Da-Lyricologist
    April 10, 2007

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    i feel ya

    wow i feel you pain reading this brough back some memories when i was in high school. You just don't know how much i can relate to your pain... keep your head up 1 luv.


    • Ice queen 17
      April 10, 2007
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      thankyou so much for commenting. I know im not alone in the pain department. But it's always nice to know a lot of people are strong about it and don't give up like my friend did.

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