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The Tears Of Sorrow

A Tear Once Formed
That was sorrows song

Of the love once shared

Is now going, going, gone

For the wonders of earth was

Only to far gone

 

A tear once formed

Upon what was once wasted

Is now what seems a tree grows

Off of that bitter moister the roots will

Arise, Arise, and be risen it will stand tall

For the sunlight, what beauty of compassion

For the glazing green leaves will shed a tear

And there upon the ground, upon yet what is found

Will stand the tears of sorrow 

 

           Why 

      Why was it,

  Must a man weep

For tears to be shared

   What compassion

      must it take

             for  

                         Tear

                             Drops

                                  Of

                                     Love     

 

A Tear of emotional compassion

For the world was still being, beginning to be afraid

For the sorrows of earth was yet to be gone

For the wonders of the universe was

Not lost, just a tear drop away from love

That was once shared upon the human race

 

Mankinds meaning was nothing short of a waste

But It was only just, just a tear drop away

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 11, 2007

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    WOW! Power in words. This is beautiful and strong. Tear drops, I'd say.
    Wonderfully touching write.
    Blessings!


  • CherylAnn
    April 11, 2007

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    OMG! WOW

    The Heart of God...
    Good Luck and thanks for entering
    Blessings
    ~Cheryl~


  • BeautifulDisaster9
    April 10, 2007

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    WHOA!!!!!

    THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!

    I AM IN AWE.

    NO JOKE.

    Okay...whew... Now that I am over my excitement, I just have to say that this is a wonderful write, and so very deep and emotional. Best of luck in the contest!!!

    <3BeautifulDisaster9


    • dragontuba
      April 11, 2007
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      Thank you so much...I just wrote what I felt in the heart and sometimes that is what is most powerful...

      Best Of Wishes
      dragontuba