Seated, side by side,
at the beach,
and thinking to illustrate
the depth of my feelings for you,
I traced,
with my finger in the wet sand,
the outline, sans arrow,
of Cupid's target.
But before I could add
an arrow and our initials,
the rising tide rushed in
to wash it all away.
A contest entry
- Break The Cliche by Lyre-Bird-.
550 points, ended April 13, 2007, 17 entries
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Firstly I want to thank you for entering the contest and following all the rules........
Your entry has been added to the finals list!!!!!
wish you the best of luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Tracey
*the finals list is in no set order, Judging takes place after the closing of the contest..............
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wow...it's amazing, i like the last stanza most.
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