My life once mourned to be alone,
Never knew death wanted it like so,
For the rain had all come quick at once.
The air had wept and wept upon my face,
Drenched my fingertips sullen and bruised.
My attempt to put the time to sleep,
until my love you came so suddenly,
You sent the rain away at once.
The sky brought sheets of yellow ray,
Golden light stood upon my grave.
Inside your palm you held the heaven,
where a feild of lilies stood upon,
as your sighs exhaled a cherub's air.
A cherub in all her love and care
My nights was without no light, no light...
but yet you bathed the stars clean and bright.
So my love you ask to be alone,
Then I shall ask this soul to go...
A contest entry
- Anything Free Verse by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended March 5, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - How do I remember thee? Let me count the ways... by Wolf Run0.
900 points, ended April 10, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderfully poetic imagery. I can really see how whoever your 'person' is, they really brightened up your life. One typo: 'feild' is spelled 'field'.
N'kay?
Best of luck in the contest, and God Bless!
-Vivian
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A very lovely poem with excellent imagery and a real deight to read. Best of luck, and thanks for entering.
David
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Excellent imagery! This is a wonderful entry! Good luck to you in the contest and this was my pleasure to read
~Tia
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wow
wow that was nice i can feel the love comeing from it ^_^
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Great!
This poem is very beautiful and I love the imagery, it paints a fascinating picture in my mind! Great job!
~Mon Amour Ange*heart*
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Where do you get your inspirations? You just keep comin and comin. I bet you NEVA get writers block huh? I tried to call you but I can't memorize your number, And my cell phone is dead. So can you send it to me one more time?
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I enjoyed this
Simple yet with deep meaning - a kind of bittersweet to me...Great job!
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