Isn’t it [~creepy~] how you take me _over_
Wandering around with that .d.e.m.o.n. on ur shoulder?
Ur [silver-tinted] lies *chase* those vodka-coated lips
Kissing your .w.a.y. towards ``instant`` ecstasy
Glitter-laced hipbones wondering why they’re br♥ken
You said “No, baby, I don’t wanna bouncy*bounce*”
My heart agreed but my body sewed the seed
tracing along with peppermint dreams
Gooey-gumdrops and silfide-sprinkled yum-yums
Slide down my throat to tango with the sandwich from yesterday
I really hope I won’t vomit up those contents
Choked with glitter and playtime-trash.For why should I with this sugar-coated gash?
XxX…[on my forehead she graces]…XxX
Mmm, hunny//baby//sweetie-pie, sweep me off my feet
&& take me away to feed me a savory treat
let me [live] and [l♥ve] amongst those ~candyland~ boys
and those ...polka-dotted... girls
I’ll drink all the [&%*colors*%&] you give me
and nibble on those [000pearls000]
Please tell me what you think
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"Isn’t it [~creepy~] how you take me _over_
Wandering around with that .d.e.m.o.n. on ur shoulder? "
love the way it sounds.
But my biggest pet peeve on here lately is over punctuation and bad grammar/spelling.
other than that :
"My heart agreed but my body sewed the seed
tracing along with peppermint dreams"
"those vodka-coated lips
Kissing your .w.a.y. towards ``instant`` ecstasy
Glitter-laced hipbones wondering why they’re br♥ken"
la.la.LOVED those parts.
wonderful boy.
[mmmhmm might call you boy wonder? haha]
♥
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o bby o bby...
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Great job!
Mmm, hunny//baby//sweetie-pie, sweep me off my feet
&& take me away to feed me a savory treat
That such awesome line
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wow. I love this poem. good expression!!!
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your poems make candy and lies seem so sexy...
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Yaaaay!!!
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ohmuhgod you are...
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Gooey-gumdrops and silfide-sprinkled yum-yums
Slide down my throat to tango with the sandwich from yesterday
i love the image of goooeynesss
♥
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"Ur [silver-tinted] lies *chase* those vodka-coated lips"
best line
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oh this is awesome!
'You said “No, baby, I don’t wanna bouncy*bounce*”'
haha i love. love it all. awesome write.
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'Gooey-gumdrops and silfide-sprinkled yum-yums
Slide down my throat to tango with the sandwich from yesterday
I really hope I won’t vomit up those contents
Choked with glitter and playtime-trash.For why should I with this sugar-coated gash?'
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My heart agreed but my body sewed the seed
tracing along with peppermint dreams
Gooey-gumdrops and silfide-sprinkled yum-yums
Slide down my throat to tango with the sandwich from yesterday
*Watches breath fly away*
you've stolen my breath away with your beautiful words
you are oh.so.talented.
how beautiful this poem is
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mmmm, i feel so special!!!
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let me [live] and [l♥ve] amongst those ~candyland~ boys
and those ...polka-dotted... girls
I’ll drink all the [&%*colors*%&] you give me
your poetry is orgazmic.
mmm.
lovelovelove it.
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Kissing your .w.a.y. towards ``instant`` ecstasy
Glitter-laced hipbones wondering why they’re br♥ken
DOLL FACE
I can tell you bleed glitter just like the rest of us, AMAZING JOB honey!! Ilove this!!!
This really is breathtaking....
love love love you doll
and all your fantabulous words that blowme away
stay ssweet as sugar dollie pie!
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