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"I'll bet she's beautiful, the girl he talks about"

A beautiful lie he’ll continue to tell
A loveless heart stuck in a spell
Loving the one whom tells me to
She is truly more to you

Just friends caught in a mild daze
She’s truly beautiful, I’m amazed

What a disgrace I’ve come to be
Watching the sun set as I agree,
I love you and I need to watch
Add yet one more despicable notch

I watch you from a distance like a spy
Using others as my final allies

Walking away, I dare not to look back
She’s so beautiful making up for all I lack

Blow a kiss as a forever goodbye
As I fill the world with my painful outcry.

Author notes

Kind of a look into my life. I was with a guy and moved out of his agreement. And i hold no trust for him but he tells me to. yet i know of all his secret relationships, i still have my friends watching... disgraceful yes....

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  • Maybe Anastasia
    April 10, 2007

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    mmm which optionis this? it seems you've combined a few. I'm sorry for you that you can't trust him but this is a nice expressive poem. thanks for the entry.