Oh God
you know
that I am a true believer,
I take for granted
that you are a titleholder of the
luminousness
I trust
that luminousness is our vitality
I profess
that you archive your radiation in a most
scriptural locus
that I end
that scriptural locus is the heart of
a woman
you know
that I am a true believer
Oh God...
Author notes
Based on a picture
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2346198
Dear friends..If you remove a heart of the woman from this Earth , please tell me that can we live then...? the heart of the woman is the light of life on this great Earth...and that light comes from HIM indeed...
A contest entry
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475 points, ended April 16, 2007, 12 entries
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I love spiritual poetry art and poetry. I don't think that there is any other reference that reflects the soul better than spirituality. I like your phrasing and how you are descriptive with few words. I think that the first and last line are very effective in portraying your point and my favorite part was "I trust
that luminousness is our vitality"
That was a reminder of me because after all our true life is eternal. Great write! -
Thank you for entering,
I am reading in lines 11, 13 the word 'locus' as focus...
I am not sure since it is repeated twice..I do think I understand
what you are saying. My culture/spititual path views the
woman as giver of life as the earth itself, I am thinking this is
close to your message..please correct me if I am wrong.
Very well written piece. -
I am spiritualy inspired
It's still stuck in my soul
Well done keep writing
With Love
Vibiesh -
That is a truly inspiring piece. I think that you did a good job of writing this. I usually don't like reading religious poems, but I really like how you wrote this, it is written very well.
~Alix -
Amazing
My friend you always seem to write a very inspirational piece, and this is no exception I am glad that I had the opportunity to read this. And I thank you for sharing it with me...
Blessed you on your challenge...
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So very beautiful and inspiring...Truly enjoyed your words my friend...good luck in this contest...smiles, Terry
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Great poem
this shows a lot of dedication to your god and such deep words , another great poem , keep up the good work and let your emotions run through your words over again
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