Don’t disrupt me baby, for I’m in the zone
Don’t unwrap me hunny, cuz I wanna be alone
Creases line my pants of corduroy and patches
Tiny finchy birds hop among the thatches
Marshmallow-creams and caviar-dreams awakened in me
Just like those yesteryears when you picked pears from my tree
Piece me together, like a god[dess] gone astray
Move like a dancer tumbling through the fray
Mmm, sweetie, take my hand and lead me through the crowd
Daddy’s too drunk to drive and the colors are too loud…
Please tell me what you think
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this is an awesome write, i just loved it!!
keep penning
~Ashley~<3 -
Mmm, sweetie, take my hand and lead me through the crowd
Daddy’s too drunk to drive and the colors are too loud…
I was blown away -
Twisting and Turning in candy euphoria
" the colors are too loud"
these words express what words that make sense can't
-XTCshotx
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lol
i didnt mean to call you "dahling"
i thouht you was
brokenwindupdoll
good poem tho! -
very good dahling
i love it =)!
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ah! so amazing and so deep!
'Daddy’s too drunk to drive and the colors are too loud… '
love that line. great job!
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Marshmallow-creams and caviar-dreams awakened in me
Just like those yesteryears when you picked pears from my tree
Mmm, sweetie, take my hand and lead me through the crowd
Daddy’s too drunk to drive and the colors are too loud…
this is great...absolutely Gorgey!!!!
you're an amazing writer love
♥
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oh.so.gorgeous.
[like you, babes]
you.are.a.maz.ing.
♥
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Marshmallow-creams and caviar-dreams awakened in me
Just like those yesteryears when you picked pears from my tree
Piece me together, like a god[dess] gone astray
Move like a dancer tumbling through the fray
Mmm, sweetie, take my hand and lead me through the crowd
Daddy’s too drunk to drive and the colors are too loud…
HONEY!!!
THIS IS GASPINGLY GREAT!!!
OMFG IT BLEW ME AWAY!!!
YOUR WORDS ARE SRTAIT ECSATCY TO MY EYES!!
BLOW ME AWAY SOME MORE BEHBEH BOY
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